Project 2 Rough Draft Workshop

Pair up with one other classmate. Exchange rough drafts with your partner and read their draft. Annotate your partner’s draft as you read. Then, answer the following questions about your partner’s draft on a sheet of paper. No need to copy down the questions themselves; just write your answers to the questions. When you and your partner are both done writing, take five to ten minutes to run through what you’ve written and discuss your advice for each other. You’ll show your answers to me at the end of class.

Give more than just “yes” or “no” answers. Go into detail and be genuine in your feedback.

1. Does the paper have a clear and identifiable thesis statement? Does the thesis statement identify A) the main argument of the work it is analyzing, B) the dominant rhetorical techniques the work uses to make that argument, and C) the rhetorical situation of the text, encompassing its exigence, audience(s), and constraints? If not, suggest specific improvements.

2. Do the first one or two sentences of each body paragraph clearly and informatively announce what that paragraph will be about? If not, suggest specific improvements.

3. Do the first one or two sentences of each body paragraph give a sense of how your partner is transitioning, in a logical way, from the point made in the previous paragraph? If not, suggest specific improvements.

4. Does the paper contain a sufficient amount of direct evidence from the text or documentary itself (in the form of direct quotations and/or detailed scene descriptions) to back up the analytical claims it is making? Does the paper “follow through” with its analysis by connecting each piece of evidence back to the paper’s overall thesis statement? If not, suggest specific improvements.

5. Does the paper analyze the dominant rhetorical appeal(s) (ethos, pathos, logos) in the text or documentary? Additionally, does the paper demonstrate an accurate understanding of what ethos, pathos, and logos are in the first place? If not, suggest specific improvements.

6. Does the paper analyze the dominant stasis form(s) (definition, cause/consequence, evaluation, proposal) in the text or documentary? Additionally, does the paper demonstrate an accurate understanding of what those stasis forms are in the first place? If not, suggest specific improvements.

7. Overall, does the paper read like an analysis as opposed to a summary or an opinion paper? That is, does the paper concentrate on decoding the structure and rhetorical techniques used by the piece, rather than A) simply summarizing the piece or B) evaluating whether its argument is “right” or “wrong”? If not, suggest specific improvements.

8. On the sentence-level, did you find the paper to be well written? Does it contain poor grammar? Is it unnecessarily wordy at times? If not, suggest specific improvements.

Intro to Rhetoric, Part 3: The Stasis Forms

Project 2 Instructions


At this point in this semester, you should be familiar with the following basic rhetorical concepts: the rhetorical appeals (i.e. ethos, pathos, logos) and the rhetorical situation (e.g. exigence, constraints, target audience). Especially after doing Project 1, you should have a good working knowledge of how these rhetorical tools work in practice. With Project 3, we’ll move from analyzing other people’s arguments to creating arguments ourselves. With Project 2, however, we’re still doing the former: analyzing other people’s use of rhetoric in order to observe and internalize good rhetorical habits.

Today, I want to add an additional set of tools to your rhetorical toolbox: in addition to the rhetorical appeals (ethos, pathos, and logos) and the rhetorical situation (exigence, constraints, and target audience), we now have the stasis forms. 

What does “stasis” mean when we’re talking about rhetoric?

From the Purdue Online Writing Lab:

Achieving stasis means that parties involved in a dialogue about a given issue have reached consensus on (or agreed upon) the information and conclusions in one or more of the stases. In ancient Rome, if legal disputants could not agree with the presented information in one of the stases, the argument would stop (arrest) and plaintiffs would attempt to agree (achieve stasis or find common ground) within the disputed information.

Stasis, in short, is the particular form an argument takes. It’s way of specifying where exactly disagreement resides–essentially, it involves two sides agreeing about where they disagree in the first place.

When you’re inventing and composing an argument–which is what you’ll be doing in our Project assignment–knowledge of stasis theory will help you figure out exactly where and to what extent you disagree with other thinkers on your topic, and will thus help you give a shape or structure–a clear logos–to the stances you wish to make throughout the paper.

When you’re analyzing someone else’s argument–which you did in Project 1, and which you’ll be doing again in Project 2–knowledge of the stasis forms helps you identify the particular kinds of underlying arguments that are at work whatever text you’re analyzing.

Although the exact number differs depending on which rhetorical theorist you’re talking to, for our purposes in this class, it is useful to cover just these four main stases:

  1. disagreement over definition
  2. disagreement over evaluation
  3. disagreement over causality
  4. disagreement over the nature of a proposal

1. Definition: Is X a Y?

The form of this argument involves disagreement over the definition of a thing or its inclusion in a category.

Examples:

Is Pluto a planet?

Is graffiti art or is it vandalism?

2. Evaluation: Is X good or bad? Is X better (or worse) than Y?

This stasis form involves disagreement over values, importance, or worthiness.

Three main criteria according to which you can evaluate something:

practicality (is this useful or not? feasible or not? legal or illegal?)

ethics (is this right or wrong? ethical or unethical? just or unjust? moral or immoral?)

aesthetics (is this good art or bad art? or, if not talking about art per se, what kind of image does this thing/event/practice send out to the world?)

Example:

“Attack on Alt-Right Leader Has Internet Asking: Is It O.K. to Punch a Nazi?”

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If graffiti is art, is it good or bad art?

3. Cause/Consequence: Will X cause Y? Is X caused by Y?

This stasis form involves whether one thing will cause another, or whether some existing thing was caused by another.

Examples:

  • Would decriminalizing marijuana reduce crime? Would it cause an increase in marijuana use among teens? Would it reduce addiction to opiates and prescription painkillers?
  • Would raising the minimum wage increase unemployment or would it lead to a better overall quality of life among low-wage workers?
  • Does treating graffiti as an art lead to more graffiti-related vandalism on the streets?

4. Policy or Proposal: Should we all do X? Should Y not be allowed?

This stasis form involves disagreement about what should be done about something.

Examples:

  • Should we federally abolish the death penalty?
  • Should Michigan fully decriminalize marijuana?
  • Should UM-Dearborn build another parking structure?

As you can probably tell by now,  a single argument can be articulated using more than one stasis form. That is, the same, single exigence might lead one person to make a definition argument, cause another person to respond with a cause-consequence argument, and inspire yet another person to respond with a proposal argument.

One example:

“Attack on Alt-Right Leader Has Internet Asking: Is It O.K. to Punch a Nazi?”

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Evaluation: is it ok or not?

Position A: No, it is a violation of the very principles of free speech and freedom of expression that liberals claim they want to protect (definition: = hypocrisy; cause-consequence stasis: leads to degradation of free speech for everyone else), or because all violence–any violence–is wrong (evaluation)

Position B: Yes, because it is preemptive self-defense (definition stasis: although different from what we traditionally think of as self-defense, it is still self-defense of a sort).

Another example: Imagine finding yourself in the following rhetorical situation, where you’ve been confronted by the following exigence:

Imagine you’ve just downloaded some music or a movie or a TV show from a file-sharing site, and now the FBI is knocking on your door. What do you say to solve this exigence?

I’ll start us off.

Definition: X is (or is not) definable as Y

“File sharing isn’t (definable as) stealing; it’s got ‘share’ right there in the word.”

Now I’d like you all to get into groups. Each group will be assigned one of the following stasis forms. Each group will write a three- to five-sentence argument that uses their assigned stasis to persuade the FBI to let you go.

Evaluation: X is good / Y is bad(or vice versa); X is more pracitcal than Y; X is just/unjust, ethical/unethical, etc.

Definition: X is (or is not) definable as Y; X is like (or not like) Y

Cause/Consequence: X will (or will not) cause Y; X is caused (or not caused) by Y

Proposal: We should do X, or not do Y

Results?

Project 1 Revision Workshop

  1. Get into groups of at least 3 people.
  2. Ideally, I’d like each group member to pull out (or access electronically) a copy of the most recently updated version of their Project 1. If certain group members don’t have one, they can still offer feedback on other group members’ drafts.
  3. For each group member, determine the most important thing still in need of revision. (Think back to what you wrote for your Response 2.) Then, take that person’s draft and revise that single most important thing as a group. It’s up to you how to actually execute these revisions. If you’re working with a hardcopy of a group member’s draft, you might do the revision either on that hardcopy or on a separate sheet of paper. Or, if you’re working with an electronic copy, you might do the revision in Microsoft Word, Google docs, etc. (If you’re using Microsoft Word to make these revisions, you might want to enable the “Track Changes” function in Word to keep track and of the changes you’ve made in the Word Document. Instructions for enabling Track Changes are here, plus allow me to quickly demo it.)
  4. When you’re finished, I’ll ask you to show me the major revision you’ve made for each group member. Afterward, your group may leave–or, if you’d like me to review one of your drafts in detail, now would also be a good time for that (in the style of an “extended office hours” meeting).

Project 1 Diagnostics / Extended Office Hours

“You” versus “I”–the latter is sometimes good to use, the former mostly never is

Why? “You” sounds too informal and is often a crutch allowing you (the student) to not be specific about whom “you” refers to (i.e. allows you to avoid identifying the ad’s target audience[s])

Careful with analysis of ethos and celebrities

On the one hand, rememer to go into more depth with your analysis of ethos and celebrities. Remember that it’s never as simple as, for example, If I this celebrity uses this product, then I should too! or If this I drink this sports drink, I’ll be just as good as this athlete featured in the ad! There’s more persuasive work going on implicitly inside the viewer’s head than what see here–for example, the implication that this celebrity trusts this company with his/her public image or reputation (for an example of this backfiring, see the recent Pepsi ad featuring Kendall Jenner), therefore this company must generally be trustworthy.

On the other hand, don’t overestimate how much the info the audience is filling in enthymemically when it comes to a featured celebrity. For example:

“Rosland Capital has William Devane open their commercial for them because it establishes a sense of credibility and trust. Devane is a well known actor that has been in many movie, his most recent being “Interstellar”. Most people associate movie stars with wealth which is a big reason as to why Devane has been hired to do this ad. According to Forbes, Devane has a net worth of 5 million dollars. This is important because in the ad he says that he trusts Rosland Capital with his money, and he has a lot of it, so why shouldn’t the average person trust his/her money with Rosland”

I would insert a sentence after the Forbes statistic that acknowledges that while Devane doesn’t reveal exactly how much he’s worth, the target audience is at least able to “get” that he’s relatively well off.

Finally, one last thing: be more cynical–not so much in the tone or voice of your writing, but rather in the substance of your analysis. 

For example;

“In conclusion, Gatorade’s “The Secret to Victory” advertisement did what it was set out to do. They included some of the most illustrious athletes to ever set foot on this earth. They made it clear how these important people failed in their life. They showed that even the best athletes in the world don’t have success all of the time. Hard work and dedication must be part of one’s culture in order to be successful. Gatorade is the most famous sports sports drink in the world and all of the athletes drink it. Drinking Gatorade adds fuel to your fire. The fire being the motivation that fuels your defeats. There is a barrier created after you face defeat. You must get past that barrier in one way or another to achieve success. Gatorade has the electrolytes to keep you hydrated to achieve success. Hard work comes naturally with motivation and after you put in the work, the results will soon show.”

Project 1 Rough Draft Workshop

Pair up with one other classmate. Exchange rough drafts with them, and answer the following questions about your partner’s draft on a sheet of paper. No need to copy down the questions themselves; just write your answers to the questions. When you and your partner are both done writing, take five to ten minutes to run through what you’ve written and discuss your advice for each other. You’ll show your answers to me at the end of class.

  1. Does your partner’s paper provide a solid introductory paragraph? In particular, does your partner avoid the temptation to start off too generally, for example by talking about all of human nature or all of advertising throughout history?
  2. Does your partner provide a clear, identifiable thesis statement at the end of their introductory paragraph? If you can’t find your partner’s thesis statement, try to come up with a thesis statement for them that reflects the analysis in the rest of the paper. If there is a clear and identifiable thesis statement, is it specific enough? Does it identify the ad’s main persuasive goal and the dominant strategies it’s using to achieve that goal? Alternatively, your partner’s thesis statement might run into the opposite problem: trying to fit too many  bits of specific information into one sentence. This results in a wordy and overly long thesis statement. If that’s the case, help your partner break up that single overly long sentence into two shorter and clearer sentences. See http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/thesis-statements/ for a little more guidance on thesis statements, as well some examples. e.g. Through its ____ and ____, this ad attempts to _(think not only about the basic exigence–the need to sell whatever product–but also any constraints or “micro” exigences the ad is responding to here)__.
  3. Does your partner include enough description of the ad’s visual, textual, and/or sonic features? By “enough,” I mean enough so that readers who have not seen the ad understand what happens in it.
  4. Does your partner adequately explain the effect the ad has on its audience, focusing on the rhetorical appeals (ethos, pathos, and/or logos)? If not, offer suggestions for improvement.
  5. Does your partner adequately explain ad’s rhetorical situation, focusing on its explicit or implicit target audience(s), its exigence, and any constraints it appears to be taking into account? If not, offer suggestions for improvement.
  6. Did any argument or analysis in your partner’s paper seem unwarranted or exaggerated (in other words, did you think your partner was “jumping to conclusions” at times or not providing enough evidence for his/her claims)? If so, explain why.
  7. Does each body paragraph have a clear topic sentence that announces the specific focus of that paragraph? If not, offer some detailed suggestions for revision.
  8. Does each body paragraph transition from the previous body paragraph in a smooth and logical manner using a clear transitional device? If not, offer some detailed suggestions for revision.
  9. On the sentence-level, did you find the paper to be well written? Does it contain poor grammar? Is it unnecessarily wordy at times? If so, offer some detailed suggestions for revision.
  10. What, in your opinion, is the strongest part of this paper? What is the weakest?

Project 1 Practice Workshop

 

  1. Get into groups of at least three people.
  2. As a group, read through the three previous student examples of the Ad Analysis paper.
  3. After reading each essay as a group, discuss what grade you would give it. Use the  rubric below. Assign numerical values in each category, and then add them up to arrive at X out of 100 points for the essay’s final grade.
  4. When you’re done, we’ll go around the room and you’ll explain the grade your group gave to each essay.

Rubric

  • The paper provides a solid introduction and a clear, identifiable thesis statement. The thesis statement should make an interpretive, analytical claim about the ad’s overall rhetorical strategy: __/10 points
  • The paper includes a description of the advertisement so that readers who have not seen the ad understand what happens in it: __/20 points
  • The paper analyzes the visual, textual, and sonic and/or musical features of the ad: __/15 points
  • The paper explains the effect the ad has on its audience, focusing on the rhetorical appeals (ethos, pathos, and/or logos) it uses: __/20 points
  • The paper explains the ad’s rhetorical situation, uncovering the ad’s target audience(s), exigence, and constraints: __/20 points
  • Each body paragraph has a clear topic sentence that announces the specific focus of that paragraph: __/5 points
  • Each body paragraph transitions from the previous paragraph in a smooth and logical manner using a clear transitional device: __/5 points
  • The paper is clearly written, has been proofread, and is free of grammatical errors: __/5 points

 

Intro to Rhetoric, part 2: The Rhetorical Situation

Quick Review of the Rhetorical Appeals

What’s pathos?

What’s ethos?

What’s logos?

Group exercise: Barbara Jordan’s “Statement on the Articles of Impeachment”

  1. Get into groups of at least two people.
  2. Now that we’ve watched Jordan’s speech in action, read Jordan’s speech in colser detail now at the following link: http://www.americanrhetoric.com/speeches/barbarajordanjudiciarystatement.htm. How you divide up the reading work among your group members is up to you. For instance, you might take turns reading paragraph by paragraph, or alternatively, all the group members might read it silently together at the same time.
  3. As a group, try to find at least one (hopefully more!) example for each of our rhetorical appeals: ethos, pathos, and logos. Although you won’t have to turn in any writing for this exercise, it would be a good idea to jot down some notes so that your group is prepared to share your thoughts with the rest of the class when we reconvene. Your group should be able to provide actual concrete evidence–actual quotes or paragraphs from Jordan’s speech–to back up your findings.

Logos?

Ethos?

Pathos?

Yet how do we connect Jordan’s text to its context? Our key for making the connection is the rhetorical situation.

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“In short, rhetoric is a mode of altering reality, not by the direct application of energy to objects, but by the creation of discourse which changes reality through the mediation of thought and action. The rhetor alters reality by bringing into existence a discourse of such a character that the audience, in thought and action, is so engaged that it becomes mediator of change” (4)

Offers a formal definition of “rhetorical situation” on page 6, in section II:

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Exigence

Audience

Constraints

Let’s apply these terms to Jordan’s text. I encourage you to draw upon the products of our textual analysis–regarding Jordan’s use of ethos, pathos, and logos–as we do this.

Exigence?

Audience(s)? Here’s a clue:

President Bush delivers his State of the Union speech in the House Chamber at the U.S. Capitol.

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Constraints? Think of these as additional exigences that arise along the way to modifying the initial, primary exigence.

For instance, in the weeks leading up to it, Republicans in Congress were trying to get out ahead of Jordan’s statement by preemptively framing her call for impeachment as one motivated purely by partisan concerns—as if it were just a Democrat wanting to impeach a Republican president because he’s Republican, not because he actually did anything wrong. And many citizens in the nation were starting to buy into that. This is a constraint that shaped Jordan’s rhetoric. It drove Jordan to make specific rhetorical choices in terms of how she made her argument (she had to appear motivated by something other than just partisan politics).

What other constraints do you think might have influenced Jordan’s statement? For instance, what do you make of the fact that she knew her Statement would be televised to a mass audience?

Another case study: The Rhetorical Situation of Big Pharma

Same (or at least very similar) rhetorical situation, but a different–very different–rhetorical response (or, in Bitzer’s words, a very different attempt at “creation of discourse which changes reality through the mediation of thought and action”):

For next time: By the beginning of class, email me a Youtube link for at least one ad that you’re thinking about using for Project 1

Intro to Rhetoric, Part 1: The Rhetorical Appeals

Today, we get to define rhetoric. What’s rhetoric?

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In our reading, Aristotle defines rhetoric as “the faculty of observing in any given case the available means of persuasion.”

Persuasion is the key word there. Any idea what Aristotle means?

What is persuasion in the first place?

What are some common situations in which we find ourselves needing to persuade others, or in which we find ourselves being persuaded by others?

Even more so than in Aristotle’s age, persuasion in our contemporary age is ubiquitous–it is everywhere constantly.

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In their book The Age of Persuasion: How Marketing Ate Our Culture, Terry O’Reilly and Mike Tennant make precisely this point. They write:

Had you stumbled upon this planet in any other era, you might have concluded that we lived in an age of stone or bronze, an ice age, an age of reason, or an age of enlightenment. But today? You couldn’t help but conclude that we live in an age of persuasion, where people’s wants, wishes, whims, pleas, brands, offers, enticements, truths, petitions and propaganda swirl in a ceaseless, growing multimedia firestorm of sales messages. (xiii)

We are constantly bombarded by attempts to persuade us–by advertisements (which persuade us to buy a product), by politicians (who persuade us to vote a certain way), and even by countless fiction films and television shows (e.g. a romantic comedy persuading us to feel particular feelings about an entirely fictional character or narrative).

Why does this matter for Comp 105?

For starters, our first major writing assignment–Project 1–is arhetorical analysis. To do a rhetorical analysis–to, as Aristotle puts it, “observ[e] in any given case the available means of persuasion”–means to observe, uncover, and reveal exactly how these different media forms (e.g. advertisements, political statements, movies, and so on) are attempting to persuade their audience to do a certain action, think a certain thought, or feel a certain feeling.

Why do we do rhetorical analysis in a writing class? Because, by analyzing and decoding how rhetoric and persuasion work in other people’s arguments, you become better at using rhetorical or persuasive strategies in your own argumentative writing. (More on that later when we get to Project 3; it’s with that assignment that we’ll begin to pivot from just analyzing other people’s arguments to making our own arguments.)

The first step in learning how to do a rhetorical analysis of an argument is to learn some useful rhetorical concepts that you can apply in your analyses. Today, we’re going to look at one set of those concepts:

The Three Rhetorical Appeals

  1. Ethos (Credibility): persuasion based on the character, expertise, or ethics of the speaker; convincing the audience that the author or maker of the text shares their values and way of life. Here’s Aristotle on ethos:

Persuasion is achieved by the speaker’s personal character when the speech is so spoken as to make us think him credible. We believe good men more fully and more readily than others … It is not true, as some writers assume in their treatises on rhetoric, that the personal goodness revealed by the speaker contributes nothing to his power of persuasion; on the contrary, his character may almost be called the most effective means of persuasion he possesses.

  1. Pathos (Emotion): persuasion that manipulates or exploits an audience’s emotions. Here’s Aristotle on pathos:

Secondly, persuasion may come through the hearers, when the speech stirs their emotions. Our judgements when we are pleased and friendly are not the same as when we are pained and hostile. It is towards producing these effects, as we maintain, that present-day writers on rhetoric direct the whole of their efforts.

  1. Logos (Logic): persuasion based on logical reasoning and often quantifiable grounds and evidence. At its most fundamental level, logos refers to the internal structure or organization of an argument. For instance, some of you in your Blog Post 1 might have noted that you’re good at coming up with ideas for essays, but have trouble organizing them into a logical structure that the reader can follow. What you’re looking for is logos. Here’s Aristotle on logos:

Thirdly, persuasion is effected through the speech itself when we have proved a truth or an apparent truth by means of the persuasive arguments suitable to the case in question.

Let’s look at these three appeals in more detail now, with examples.


Logos

Good logic can indeed be thought of as crucial to being persuasive, a kind of ideal state for any argument and for public life in general. It’s good to be logical, and we should all aspire to make logical arguments.

The reality, however, is that we certainly don’t–indeed, we can’t–always think or communicate with good, consistent logic. As the following video demonstrates, human nature is such that we can’t help but make mistakes, we abuse good logic, we have biases, we lie, and so on:

Rhetorical analysis makes you think not only about the solidness or soundness of a logical claim, but also–more importantly–about the underlying problems with logic. We will work our way toward understanding how logos plays a part in forming smart larger arguments, but today we should emphasize that rhetorical analysis ‘reads’ for more than fully-fledged, logically clear arguments–since (as you can already tell) there is much more about persuasion in society than a world of air-tight, logically bulletproof arguments.

In short, rhetoric asks us to think realistically about the good uses of logic, but also about its limitations.

For instance:
“Good logic” can be abused to support bad ideas, and we have many examples of classic satirical essays that draw on the appeal of logos to spoof how we can rationalize almost anything.

Additionally, logos is also quite persuasive when it’sincomplete. That is, much of the information we encounter in the world is given to us in a fragmented or partial form–what Aristotle, and the other ancient rhetoricians, called the enthymeme.

In Book I, Chapter 1 of the Rhetoric, Aristotle defines enthymemes as “the substance of rhetorical persuasion.” He also mentions them a great deal in our reading, Chapter 2. For example:

The enthymeme must consist of few propositions, fewer often than those which make up the normal syllogism. For if any of these propositions is a familiar fact, there is no need even to mention it; the hearer adds it himself.

An enthymeme is a claim about something, but not quite a fully fleshed-out argument. As Aristotle puts it, your average enthymeme has “fewer [propositions] than whose which make up the normal syllogism.” Smart people (people who are comfortable thinking rhetorically) always look to read arguments in terms of their component parts, and in the enthymeme, not all of these parts is made explicit to you. (This connects to logos in that logos is always about the internal structure of in argument, the relations between its component parts and how well those parts fit together.) Let’s lay out the most common component parts of an enthymeme below:

The claim
The stated reason for the claim
The unstated assumption behind the claim
Grounds or evidence supporting the claim

A fully developed, fleshed-out argument will make all of these parts explicit to its audience. Enthymemes, by contrast, are claims that come to us missing some of these component parts, but that are still undeniably persuasive to us humans. Why are they still persuasive?

Because people tend to “fill in” the blanks with assumptions, biases, or pre-conceived reasons. This is what Aristotle means, in the passage we just quoted, when he says, “if any of these [missing] propositions is a familiar fact, there is no need even to mention it; the hearer adds it himself.” Most people add or fill in these blanks automatically, without reflecting on it or thinking about it. Other people, however–people like you, who will soon be trained to think rhetorically and do good rhetorical analysis!–will take a more critical, intellectual stance toward how these blank spaces get filled during the process of persuasion.

Some famous enthymemes:

“All humans are mortal, so Socrates is mortal.”
Claim: Socrates is mortal
Stated reason: all humans are mortal
Unstated assumption: because Socrates is a human

Build your own enthymeme:

Women should be allowed to join combat units because the image of women in combat would help eliminate gender stereotypes.

Claim:
Stated reason:
Unstated assumption(s):
Evidence:

An argument in which there’s a whole bunch left unstated:

“Make America Great Again”

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Claim:

Stated reason (is there even one?):

Unstated assumption(s):

Evidence:

In sum, this is what I’ll mean when I ask you to analyze the logos of an argument: I am asking you to dissect and break down its logical structure, its component parts. Which of the parts are explicit and present to the audience, and which are only implied and left for the audience to “fill in”?


Pathos

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Of course, being persuasive involves more than being logical. Indeed, often the most persuasive arguments are those that skip the logical details and focus instead on stirring up emotions in their audience, as this clip from Mad Men demonstrates:

How does pathos work? The following video, which presents a “Skype Laughter Chain,” offers some insight:

Emotions are contagious. Seeing someone laugh tends to make us feel like laughing in turn. Likewise, unfortunately, for seeing sad stuff:


Ethos

Ethos refers to persuasiveness derived from credibility or trustworthiness.

For example, when you eventually write a college-level research paper, you’ll build ethos or credibility by citing high-quality sources. A student whose only source is a Wikipedia article will appear significantly less credible than a student citing multiple books and scholarly articles from the University library.

Ethos is also an important factor in advertising. For example, when an actor in a pain reliever commercial puts on a doctor’s white coat, the advertisers are hoping that wearing this coat will give the actor the credibility to talk persuasively about medicines:dermatologistBanner_1

On the other hand, in the video below, the actor’s ethos is perfectly clear about how it’s a deceptive illusion (which ends up producing a form of pathos as a result: the emotional response of laughter):

All throughout the media, sports heroes, popular actors and actresses, and rock stars are often seen as authorities on matters completely unrelated to their talents. This is an instance of the persuasive power of image and ethos.

Ethos also has to do with something a bit more complex: something more like, shared way of life or shared worldview. Hence:

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High School Writing versus College Writing

According to our reading for today, as you transition from high school writing to college writing, “some expectations of arguments (such as including a thesis statement) may be familiar to you, but others (such as the emphasis on finding alternative ways of thinking about a subject and finding facts that might run counter to your conclusions) may be unfamiliar” (3).

Let’s unpack this a bit.

First, what’s a thesis statement? According to the textbook, this is something that you should (most likely, although maybe not) be familiar with from high school.

Second: what do you think the reading means by “finding alternative ways of thinking about a subject and finding facts that might run counter to your conclusions”? This, remember, is an aspect of college writing that our textbook thinks you probably aren’t so familiar with yet, at least not much as you are with thesis statements.

 

 

 

 

To help a bit, consider something else the textbook mentions a little further down on page 3, which explains this notion further:

opposing positions

What’s all this mean?

No argument exists in a vacuum; or rather, no thoughtful argument exists in a vacuum. Rather, a thoughtful argument is always explicitly engaged in a conversation with other, differing points of view. Learning how to both articulate and engage with differing points of view–or, in other words, learning how to (as our syllabus puts it) “go beyond an either/or debate on an issue or topic to a more complex rendering of perspectives”–is, for my money, the main thing that gets emphasized more as you switch from high school writing to college writing.


To get you guys to start developing this skill, I want to do a short group writing exercise today. Next time I’ll be in full-on lecture mode, so for today, I’d like to hear just a bit more from you guys.

Debating the Five-Paragraph Essay

  1. Get into groups of at least three people. Make sure there is at least one internet-equipped laptop per group (this may result in some big groups, but that’s ok).
  2. As a group,  read each of the three short articles I’ve uploaded to the Files section on our Canvas. Two of them are in favor of the five-paragraph essay, and one is against the five-paragraph essay.
  3. After discussing these articles’ various points of view on the five-paragraph essay, get out a blank of sheet of paper, on which you’ll explain what your group’s position is on the five-paragraph essay. To do this, the only writing you’ll need to do is to fill in the blanks in the following template. Note that these blanks ask you not only to indicate your position (as a group), but also the positions of other participants in this debate (as exemplified by the three articles).

In recent discussions of the five-paragraph essay, one controversial issue has been ___________________. On the one hand, some argue ___________________. From this perspective, ___________________. On the other hand, others contend ___________________. According to this position, ___________________. Our group’s view is _____[your thesis statement goes here]_____.

When you’re done, we’ll go over the results together as a class. On your way out, turn in today’s group work (with each group member’s name listed at the top).


For next time:

First day of class

Hello! Welcome to Composition 105: Rhetoric and Writing I.

On tap for today:

  • Attendance/introductions
  • Go over syllabus
  • In-class Group Writing Exercise

In-class Group Writing Exercise

The goal of this exercise is to get you thinking about material you can discuss in Response 1. Get into groups of at least 3 people. Make sure to designate one person as the “writer,” who will be in charge of getting your group’s ideas down on paper. At the end of the exercise, each group will briefly summarize its response to the rest of the class; to this end, make sure you designate another one of the group members as the “speaker,” the person who’ll do (most of) the presenting. You’ll be handing in your group’s written responses to me at the end of class, with each group member’s name listed at the top.

Please do the following:

1. Share with each other what your experiences with writing were like in high school. What sorts of writing assignments did you do? What counted as “good” writing at your high school? Compare your high school writing experiences to those of your other group members. What do your experiences have in common and how do they differ?

2. Share with each other what you expect writing in Comp 105 to be like. How do you expect it to differ from high school writing?

3. Take a close look at the “Learning Outcomes” section on the syllabus. Find at least two terms or concepts listed there that sound new, strange, or unfamiliar in some way. Work together to decode and understand these terms or concepts as best as you can, and be sure to detail any difficulties you have along the way. We’ll discuss the results when we reconvene as a class.


For next time:

  • Reading: A Little Argument, pp. 1-10
  • Due: Response 1